Knife Carving Set

Knife Carving Set
Disgust and Anger??? a poem?

There's a hatred within
this ugliness I feel
you cannot compare
disgust and anger
from the past choices
these voices screaming
never allowing me to forget
I feel that my mind is set in
wishing to remove those memories
taking a knife and carving them out
it just makes me scream and shout
I’ve had enough
of all this garbage and stuff
I am trash, the voices howler
fifth, and nothing more
but your lover has made it to shore
your ship has come in
he loves you for who you are
knowing the nasty past
still willing to love me
and always will be there for me

Lately, I've seen you post a lot of stuff... but I haven't really read any of it lol

So, I read this one.

its good.. however.. "stuff" isn't a good word to use.. maybe a diff. word??

Also, you need punctation. Periods and commas. It will make your poem flow a tad bit better, help guide the reader, allow the reader to pause and take breaths, and all together just make your poem better.

good luck,

jaja

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